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Brit McReynolds's avatar

That first line is so powerful, Nick, the way it grabs you. And the sounds you carry throughout convey the harshness of the dreaming, the unrest, ending with that final line of begging for dreamless sleep. Great poem.

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Benno's avatar

Enjoyed the dense style and imagery!

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